Her eyes behold!

Through unchartered waters

On water's glass

I sail

In eyes blue.

Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

This is beautiful AM you capture the allure of the blues eye perfectly!! (but hello brown eyes ??? hazel eyes??) You left them out hehehe

[andrew mitchell]

I have hazel eyes lol but alas there are only mud pools for brown eyes hence the sea is better lol

[sereenaoutloud]

well I'm yet again weird one 2 different colours..i have a dark brown eye (its almost black) and a light brown eye (almost hazel)

[andrew mitchell]

I've always admired David Bowie. Hi Mrs David Bowie!!

[sereenaoutloud]

omg i am so keeping my mouth shout ..Mrs T and now this...im handing you the names on a silver platter... ------ me zipping my mouth closed! heheheh

[andrew mitchell]

I'm pulling your chain lol I think I would like your eye colours!!!:)

[B]

oh this poem is real nice
Feels like being in the middle of the ocean

With the perfect blue eyes lol

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Nisreenaa, the blue eyes can lure one into an ocean blue!!

[B]

Oh the blue eyes sings tunes
Plays with one's heart
Enslaves the body
And shot me down at first sight

wohooo lol

[andrew mitchell]

lol frankie cheek to cheek. or Frankie's I've got you under my spell!

[B]

Perfect .... gonna you tube that lol

[alf]

Hi Andrew. Subtlety abides!!!!!!!!!! Layered and achingly poignant!!! Blue eyes, alas, seem to be the spirit of verse at the moments!! Love this, and the melancholy lurking . . . alf

[andrew mitchell]

Y thank you alf:)

[....................]

The eyes are oceans of wonderment... a beautiful write, Andrew, about that which can drive us to mad love :)

[andrew mitchell]

unfortunately my wife has brown eyes but there is no brown sea lol

[....................]

perhaps the reflection of a wooded shoreline upon clear water :)

[andrew mitchell]

too many splinters lol and limperts

[....................]

lol.... :)

[~]

hey, you forgot mother earth :D (sticking up for brown/hazel eyes )

[andrew mitchell]

On a lake of mud I got stuck...... lol:) Ok I want some of your sugar !! Another great idea!!

[~]

ahhhh, ask maroon 5 for some sugar LOL

[andrew mitchell]

lol...........................