Awaken!!

Awaken eyes touch.

The look of love

A heart adored.

A look of anger

A heart scorned

A look of sadness

A heart that weeps

That look.. a smile

A happy heart!

Awaken eyes touch.

Reviews

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All it takes is a look and we know... you've captured many an emotion in this piece, Andrew... the observations of a married man :)

[andrew mitchell]

lol FT yes you can pick the body language through the eyes lol

[alf]

Hi Andrew. A very sensual write from that wakening perspective and wondering what lies ahead . . . fo the day . . . for the week . . . and even perhaps . . . for eternity!!! Now we are left, what happened next . . . NO!!! better to leave that our imagination!! alf

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks alf I'll think of something lol

[alf]

I have NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO doubt about that!!!!!!!!!!!!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

We soon know how the land lies from that first morning look Andrew. Are we still in the dog house or are we redeemed?

[andrew mitchell]

Always outside looking in john lol

[B]

Romantic and a brush of love strokes these words ...... Streaming down a smooth river
With the sun setting
A beautiful lover in sight

And serenity all around ..... on board a heart filled with love
Many words withheld waiting for the right time

LOVELY

[andrew mitchell]

One can be touched visually by the eyes without being touched physically lol :):)

[B]

True that .....