HER SKIN SO SOFT I.............

Hugging her tightly

Pulling me close

Travelling down her body,

Her hands on mine

Her skin is moist.

Her neck line;

Heavenly scented

Allowing me to roam;

Wrapped around her

Freedom to move.

She's comfortable.

I brush her thighs,

Her legs ...softly.

I touch her breasts,

Her bottom, held tight.

I protect her,

Comfort her,

Parade her with

Colour, style.

I'm her chauffeur.

Looking at me

We dance;

Spinning, twirling.

I feel her...

Heat on skin;

Warmer, warmer,

She unzips me

I fall to the floor!

I am................................................................ HER DRESS!

Sometimes, I give her  wedgies!! :)

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Reviews

[PANDORA]

I think the end adds such a sweet note to the romance.

I'm her chauffeur.--a great line.

The first two stanzas are describing the travel of the jet-setter...I would shift the second stanza in a different direction. Just a suggestion, it does not make or break the writing.

Thanks for the adventure.

[Desiree O'Neal]

this was really well thought out and really cool.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you very much😀

[softlyfall]

Damn it Andrew, knock that off.
Thus was so good for a while
Pffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffttttt
Well it's funny but I was just enjoying the salaciousness of it all.

[andrew mitchell]

lol thank you Amy. Its great for me Women get to try me on! oops hang on I'm not a dress!!! lol;)

[softlyfall]

Well, I suppose pretending to be clothing might be a salacious and hilarious form of role play

[Ruth]

I like the descriptions here which makes the reader feel as though they are lured to intimacy but the finale is much stronger actually...like it :) Unique and intelligently done :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for your kind words Poppy!

[Ruth]

My pleasure :)

[M.Babu]

AHEM!
Of course you could ONLY be her dress...Good one my friend - my mind had wandered elsewhere thanks for the wonderful clarification.
Such a fun piece :D.
~M.Babu~

[andrew mitchell]

Yes! some dresses have all the fun! lol:) Thanks Babu

[Einstein Noodle]

humorous ending ...classic andrew right!? :) i love the intimacy of being her dress ..and the "...chauffeur..." driving her were she wants to go is beautiful ...
E.

[andrew mitchell]

Yes !! Thanks E With the right dress she can go anywhere hence in a way a dress is a chauffeur! taking her around where she wants to go

[.]

Haha. Another cheeky write, Andrew.

Just when i thought this was venturing into xxx territory did you make the perfect switch in theme.

A brilliantly cheeky poem.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks for your words Doodley

[Érenn]

Sheesh, did you have to add the last line ? lol , But i think i know why you did that. A clever poem nonetheless.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Errenn

[terry smith]

..you should have put....as told to me by J. Edgar Hoover...lolololol...funny bit my friend:)

[andrew mitchell]

lol thank you terry

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

LOL you always get us in the end Andrew....hook....line....and sinker :0)