The erogenous playground at war!

Mouths locked

Duelling tongues fencing;

Cat and mouse.

Pulses racing,

Swirling tongues, 

Medusa's snakes.

Sigh sounds

Two hearts

Strike a chord.

Tongues dance

Defending posts;

Tongue-wars.

Lovers thirst

" the French Kiss"

"Baiser Francais"

 

     Amorous,

       Slowly

       Winding

     Passionately

        Enduring

          Wild

       Entangling

         Kisses.

Reviews

[jesserose99]

I liked the multi-layered feel to this Andrew, and my goodness...that's all I can say.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you JR for your words

[~]

:D and nobody gets tired of rediscovering new lands, or -reclaim them :D

[alf]

Hi Andrew. Your poems are heading in a new direction!! Or is that just your mind at work?? I read this several times before I decided I truly liked it!!! Kind of sensually heated erotica, and yet again, the layers!! alf

[andrew mitchell]

hi alf just experimenting under the moon laboratory lol

[alf]

Ohhhh. I don't what I can do to persuade to you to SHARE!!!!!

[andrew mitchell]

lol....................

[B]

Yes yes yes
lol

We all know of this one

As always Andrew .... a sweet little poem coming from a sweet man

[andrew mitchell]

lol thanks Nisreenaa

[Gee]

Yeahhhhhh,snogging and shagging,well come on Andrew,did you expect anything else from your simple English buddy.

[andrew mitchell]

nope!!!! lol lol Thanks gee you are just fish and chips matey!! lol