As the cold gets in...

As the wind

With its arms

Wraps around me,

Mr. Chill,

Cold as ice

Invades.

The mechanisms of life

Work harder..

The heart will find a way.

Reviews

[B]

Getting warm on a cold night
I can feel the chill

May you never feel cold .....ever

[andrew mitchell]

thank you Nisreenaa

[Jamestown]

Oh my I can stand the cold and your words described chilling weather
very well, but I love your work so the slight chill was worth it:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[andrew mitchell]

Lol Jamestown thank you my friend, keep warm and I love your work too my friend:)

[sereenaoutloud]

I can never image you anything but warm, happy and cheeky! But this writes is beautiful, love the imagery you create of the cold wind wrapping it's arms around you! Bbbbrrrrr perfect as the Aussie winter starts to set in!! :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Sereena, cheeky is easy, happy too but as I get older the frustrations grow when things go wrong lol:0 Thank you for your kind words!!:)

[alf]

Hi Andrew. Whether we talk of winter or love, that chill is a killer!!! Oh so truth on any level you wish!!! Loved this!! alf

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks alf, you astound me with the way you scratch the surface to see what may lie beneath to find another meaning and you do!!! lol I'm glad you do!! lol

[alf]

Biiiiiig sigh!!!! That s me!!!

[Valentine]

That's right, Australia is going into winter while we are looking forward to summer. Hope you have someone to warm up that chill. Valentine

[andrew mitchell]

Its getting frosty and for us that's cold

[....................]

Such hope at the end of this piece, Andrew.. "The heart will find a way" even when the chill of the wind sets in. Great piece.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you FT Ledrewteer

[....................]

haha, Nachos, you are sooooo cheesy :)

[andrew mitchell]

haha lol and supreme, that's what the packet says!! lol

[....................]

hahaha... well, you are that.. the packet, I mean... just kidding... the SUPREME entertainer, Nachos Porthos Poetos

[Tomás Ó C..]

Through all the sotrms of life, the heart will find a way...

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Tomas for dropping by

[marcus]

The more the heart works, the hotter it gets!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Marcus. Yes in deed

[marcus]

Great poem!