Crunch time!

As black fin rises

Slicing water's edge;

The target, the surfer.

Thrashing, splashing

Painting the ocean red.

.......a leg....

White teeth, razor sharp

Stained red.

On ocean's bed

Drifting, sandy shores

.......a leg.... 

              no more.

Reviews

[Relic]

Yikes! I can hear the double notes now getting quicker and quicker in the background. What a terrible way to meet your end. Chum for sharks does not sound like fun. Nicely done.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you relic, much better to ride with dolphins lol

[Relic]

haha, Flipper does appear more docile than Jaws. ha

[andrew mitchell]

yes good ole flipper!

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SHARK!!!!!!! This reminded me of Jaws... love the play on the title... I was expecting something like: "Well, it's time to buckle down...", you know, it's crunch time!!!!

[andrew mitchell]

Did you mean cereal ?? lol FT, I hate sharks hence a surfer I am not and how I would like to!! :)

[....................]

haha, or the cereal, aye aye captain!!!