love lost

Severed is the love

That bleeds so profusely

From the heart  'til empty.

Reviews

[~]

this has sadness in every lifeless heartbeat. the emotion leaves with the host, and abandoned heart only hears the lonely chambers getting louder..

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you ms and well said!!:)

[Kelly Scheppers]

I've got band-aids and a shoulder, if that'll help! ...keep it coming, Andrew...more!!!

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Kelly just wanted to write something raw!! lol

[Sydney]

Good composure of words here.. Short, but so powerful

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Sydney and for dropping by

[Samaira]

Lost love does turn out to be one of the most emotionally draining things in our life.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks for droppin by Mannat