blind!

Wrenched from the sockets

Love wandering around blind

A heart that can't see.

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Expressive as a senyru should be Andrew and appropriately metaphorical. Two points:
a) Did you mean wrenched rather than wretched? and
b)The first line has six syllables.

[andrew mitchell]

Both! Thank you John . Where would I be without a trusty Scot to correct my forgetful hurried ways. Its Good Day and thank you Sir Scot!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

My pleasure sir, my pleasure.

[andrew mitchell]

A toast to you in Guinness

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ehm....I think it now has four syllables lol as wrenched is one and wretched was two?

[John Alexander McFadyen]

PS Guinness is Irish lol!

[andrew mitchell]

its all good for me lol