That smile

She looks at me

With lazy smile;

Contentment shines;

A wild child.

She caresses her glass

With her cigarette

Her thoughts free

Emotions  wet.

Her warmth wraps

A blanket, sunshine

Unadorned is the love

Her smile.....one of a kind.

While nothing is said

Everything is understood

Precious our smiles

Because this moment

Will never be again.........

Reviews

[alf]

hey Andrew!!! Stop hogging all those moon pills!!! This is such a brilliant write!! You have taken a moment in passing and soooo captured it on paper!!! Well done my friend!!! alf

[andrew mitchell]

thanks alf I love moon pills! lol

[alf]

So do I when I get to read stuff like this one!!!! Take another couple!!!

[Robert]

Its always nice to sit and sometimes not even say a word.."because this moment will never be again". So true that line is Andrew. Well done.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you my friend

[wordman]

the encounter,love in motion trying to read each other`s mind
a great write

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Wordman Glad you enjoyed!

[wordman]

you are welcome,hell we don`t pay 60.00 for lobster we just jump in the creek and catch the

[andrew mitchell]

so I hear, hence we just look at pictures lol

[wordman]

you was supposed to say they ain`t no lobsters in the creek

[andrew mitchell]

lol...............

[wordman]

then I would say oh hell! what was that we ate lol

[....................]

each moment exists on its own... each encounter creates such a moment... and a smile is everything, even if it is never acted upon... and you are right, Andrew, sometimes nothing has to be said in order for there to be understanding

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you FT you captured my thoughts like lobsters in a basket!! Much appreciated your words my friend.

[....................]

oh, lobster... love lobster... i had lobster roe sandwiches for lunch :)

[andrew mitchell]

Over 60 dollars here for a small one

[....................]

holy cow... you can get a two pound lobster here for about $10

[B]

A smile
The window to pretty much everything
If she smiles way too much
You just got too lucky lol

Lovely as always Andrew :)

[andrew mitchell]

lol thank you Nisreenaa or she could just be too happy!

[B]

that too ol

[B]

lol ......................................

[sereenaoutloud]

That encounter , that look and smile that can capture us from across a room! Beautiful and sensual write AM .., love it !! :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This, Andrew reads like a casual encounter with a stranger across a room and has that quality of reflective disappointment that it will never be more than that.

[andrew mitchell]

yes so right you are john, those fleeting moments of grandeur stopped only by a domineering conscience lol

[ANTO]

You painted a super sensual scene Andrew my friend - where "nothing is said, Everything is understood" -
This is the second poem in a hour that has that 60's free spirited wild child feel to it - which I love - but whats happening? I didnt get the memo.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Anto and it was the memo of love lol