OMG! She takes the lead!

Heaven is when

She takes the lead

Whipping me into submission,

I finally oblige.

When she straddles

Me on top

Naked we ride

She takes control

With freedom

On her side.

Saddled she is...

Her moves bounce

Up, down, she slides

Her hands on my shoulders

She says "Faster! Harder!"

While laughing I obey.

Sweet are her movements

Of adoring love.

Round and round

She grinds me tightly;

Her knees by my sides,

In fields of joy

Riding the crests of love.

Then..

Tied to the posts

She gently whips me

My limbs are restrained

Brushing me closely

She strokes me wild

Whispering in my ear.

I pull on her restraints

I fan my tail

I shake my head

I flash my teeth.

I can't wait for my hay!

Neigh! Neigh!

Reviews

[Mary Helda]

First of all,the title had me giggling,,then the first 3 stanzas got my imagination running wild till i read the 16th line and i got confused,i was like "who has the ability to laugh at that particular moment..when everything is so intense"....well,then i finished the poem and i am literally dying of laughter.....a horse!!!!!! Oh boy!!!!
I loved this one...wonderfully penned:-)

[andrew mitchell]

haha you have to be a horse and laugh or snigger at that moment LOL Thank you Mary just a funny write!

[Mary Helda]

haha:-)...you are welcome

[RomaJ]

Hahaha I knew it. A horse, eh. Man, I've never ridden a horse, but man oh man...do you make it sound so exciting!

[andrew mitchell]

hahahaha Hi I'm wilbur! Of course of course a horse! Lol

[RomaJ]

of course hahaha

[alf]

Hahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was so taken in by this!!! But as soon as I read the closing lines I already knew I should have known better!~!! Thank you, oh master of the twisted tale. You have given me life!!!!! alf

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you alf lol

[alf]

I have laughed and spluttered so much tonight I have to leave my desk and find relief in medication!!!

[andrew mitchell]

i hope you get well alf

[alf]

Oh, mate!!! So do I!!!

[GreenEyedPoet]

Oh man you've got me cracking up over here AM! Lol. Very clever, loved it. :)

[andrew mitchell]

You can thank Mr Ed of course a horse!!

[GreenEyedPoet]

Well thank you Mr Ed! Lol.

[sereenaoutloud]

Oh Cheeky TTM, this was such a fun gallop you took us on!! lol

[andrew mitchell]

hahahaha I know what you were all thinking!!! I'm Mr Ed, A horse is a horse of course of course!!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You always seem to do one of these gems on a Sunday morning for me, So funny. Might need a mature label though?

[andrew mitchell]

If you aren't horsing around I think you need the mature label John. I'm Mr Ed what's on your mind lol you wicked Scot you!!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed I do AND I horse around once a week lol

[andrew mitchell]

Lol You make me laugh again my friend, lol my smile aches!!

[AaronFreitas]

Lmao classic Andrew write.... with a twist of course. Great write got a big laugh and smile out of me!

[andrew mitchell]

What twist!!! did I miss something which is not horses!!!

[AaronFreitas]

I was reading the words texting girls to come over then realized it was about a horse... good thing I watched American Pharoah win the triple crown today lmao

[andrew mitchell]

Mr Ed will be pleased! lol

[AaronFreitas]

lol too funny you are too awesome my friend

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Aaron your comments are so generous my friend

[Kelly Scheppers]

My, my, I see your mischievous nature has struck once again. Should I give you a cigarette, or will an apple do? ; )

[andrew mitchell]

Horses don't smoke! Lets just go for a ride!!:)

[andrew mitchell]

horsing around that is!

[~]

With such a performance I wonder why they don't offer fresh and easy ;)

[andrew mitchell]

lol.................

[....................]

nice horsey... now, eat your hay :)

[andrew mitchell]

lol thanks FT did you like it!