Farewell

As she waves goodbye

Colours of her rainbow... die

Her memories, now begin

A downward turn, fade.

Awash by tears shed

With time... erased.

 

Reviews

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we love, they leave and take their colours with them... it all fades with 'time'... i see time has been keeping you in thought, Andrew.. I enjoyed this, my friend

[andrew mitchell]

all on good time FT lol:)

[armin]

Those phrases powerfully describe the sad emotions especially the opening, first two lines.

armin. ...

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks armin

[Valentine]

When love dies in an unwanted ending many tears are shed. Valentine

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Kathie

[John Alexander McFadyen]

So you can write profound poetry my Fosters swilling friend!

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Tangible sadness in these verses. As we walk away, sometimes we take the rest with us.

[ANTO]

I think 'shared' should be 'shed' or not...?

I love the images here - memories fading and like a drawing on a chalk-board being washed off
class piece A.M. - moving stuff mate. :))

[andrew mitchell]

Very good Anto as always inspiring hints much appreciated I did not view that angle shed as shared meant many amongst friends but this is good. Thanks my friend :)

[~]

mmmmm how about 'shred' kkkkkkkkkkk

[andrew mitchell]

lol Now now MS it could be Shrek!! :0 you mocker you! :)

[~]

hehehehe :D :D sorry, it was too easy of a target to miss ;O)

[andrew mitchell]

Lol I know lol Well played MS :):) Karma will get you!!!

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I'm always so eloquent. Everybody gets me ;)