a needle in a haystack we look

Through the hay

We sieve, we look 

That needle, a love.

That eludes us

In a world so big

A needle, a haystack

One love.

In hay

We sieve

We search

For love.

That will find us

In the end:

Found is that love.

Then, maketh the hay

While the sun shines

Full circle, that love.

Reviews

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love the hay metaphor... in the word's hay we look for and sometimes find the one love and it is, indeed, a needle in that stack of human population... then we make use of the hay to sustain our love... nicely tied together, my friend...

[andrew mitchell]

As always thank youFT

[Valentine]

That is a cute one...make hay while the sun shines. Love is great when it is found. Valentine

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Kathie

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I really liked the sieving of the hay metaphor. We all try to find something that is perfect for us..

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Skittles. We all strive for the better:)

[micky]

This is beautifully presented I love this piece ur best as of yet :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Micky

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A 'circular saw' of a poem Andrew. As you cavort amongst the bales seeing lust for love lol.
Seriously crisp write that gets the grey cells moving!

[andrew mitchell]

lol Thanks john