Life

Life.

In a pattern of fibres,

Clothed, I grow.

I run, a road.

Heartstrings are pulled;

Measured.

I keep running

Until I stop...

Dead

In my tracks.

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

Short verse on the story of life. Has Mel Brooks seen this yet. Life and God are his thing. Anyway great write. I liked it a great deal You covered it, Birth to death.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Willard

[fattycbreezy52]

An imagery again from the world of fabrics.There's something with you and imagery ,I think.Long-lost friends?;D
Plus,a wonderful writeup

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you FCB52

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This short piece has pathos and flows nicely as it demonstrates the life of 'man' is relatively short.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank You My Scotty friend

[~]

ahhh.. i couldn't help but thinkg of your fourth line as a 'run in the road" to continue with the fabric theme -- i liked the mixed imagery, just like life itself.

[andrew mitchell]

When we all look at our photos growing up til we are now we are all clothed hence the spin on clothing lol Actually it was going to be "my road" lol :):)

[~]

hehehe :D all roads lead here :D

[andrew mitchell]

You have plenty of clothing I take it!! lol

[~]

no way i'm sharing :D

[andrew mitchell]

lol...................... hoarder!!!

[~]

i was born in the year of the DRAGON :D

[andrew mitchell]

Lucky you I was born a pig !! how deflating!!:)

[~]

lol ...................