Replacements are in queues

Dizzy is the love

From highs above.

But one slip, one fall

The love plummets

Freefall.

To the ground

Crushed.

The spell broken,

Love, expelled;

A puff!

On pavement runs

To be found

A stranger, new.

The love shoots

Rising again,

Growing, opening, 

A flower; a love

Through rose coloured glasses.

Another one's treasure

A love

That will follow

Its course, measured 

By time. 

Reviews

[....................]

A nice look at replacing love that has left... it happens... maybe we aren't made to live alone...

[andrew mitchell]

I don't think we are otherwise we all would get pregnant eating weeties or somethings in the corn lol

[....................]

now there's adaptataion at work :)

[andrew mitchell]

lol.........................

[Valentine]

I never found falling in love to be that fast or easy. Infatuation perhaps..love takes a lot of time. Nice write. Valentine

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Kathie

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Another crisply flowing piece describing the ups and downs of relationships as they are recycled.

One possible typo:
second line first stanza 'high' not 'highs'? (although I know you were longing for a spliff when you wrote it!)

[andrew mitchell]

Hi John I meant Highs! as in Highs!! lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You druggie you!

[andrew mitchell]

lol love is the drug ask bryan ferry

[~]

A new key ejects the old key say the latinos - a great description of how love can and will be replaced.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you MS Yes how one love replaces another in time like we were not meant to be alone maybe to continue our species like bunnies do !! lol Thank you for dropping by Girlie!!:):)

[~]

oh yes, let me hop over there and make sure all the little ones are asleep LOL

[andrew mitchell]

lol Its only 3.10pm Friday here

[~]

you Aussies are a strange spices, what's wrong with 3:10 pm? hmm? lol

[andrew mitchell]

Tell that to the kids go to sleep now!! lol

[~]

what? you don't believe in naps?? :D

[andrew mitchell]

I believe!!! I would have one justto recharge the batteries especially after a restaurant lunch with wine etc