What's she thinking I wonder!

An outside Italian cafe

Busy, bustling, the crowd

Drinking my wine I see

Her seated, looking.

What is she thinking right now?

Sipping her wine

Scanning the crowd seated.

Does anyone fancy me?

Do you like what you see?

What is she thinking right now?

Dragging on her cigarette, alone.

Has she pulled the washing in?

Did she buy those eggs?

What is she thinking right now?

Dressed impeccably, sunglasses on

She crosses her leg, thighs exposed

Does anyone want me?

Someone talk to me?

What is she thinking I wonder?

Flicking her hair black, back

What will I have for dinner tonight?

Whose hearts can I break?

Will anyone say hello?

What is she thinking right now?

I wonder. She signals the waiter.

No one buys her a drink.

Out with the lipstick:

Another coat red!

What is she thinking right now?

Smiling, our eyes touch. We meet.

Does she know what I'm thinking?

I wonder because....

I don't like men in drag!

I'm not that way inclined.

 

 

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Always fun and clever writing by you my friend:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[andrew mitchell]

y thank you Jamestown

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Ahhh another sly twist at the ending haha.....lol.....hmmmm what was he thinking? :0) A good one....ya got me!

[andrew mitchell]

lol Yes indeed what was he thinking!!Thanks Jane

[sereenaoutloud]

LOL i really did not expect that at all! Such a beautiful write that had me picturing an elegant french lady all dressed in white, luscious long black wavy hair, red pumps, waiting.. no expecting to get all the attention, get her drinks and meal paid as she gets by on her looks...then nope lol !!
love It AM!!

[andrew mitchell]

I had to endings I chose the twisted lol Thank you LL

[Sami Khalil]

I'm weary of those curves you take us on but never wary of your writes. Excellent fun and twists...:)..............

[andrew mitchell]

Lol Thanks Sami Yes I will give these twisted tales a rest for now!! lol

[Sami Khalil]

Please don't. You are welcome...:)................

[Mick Burke]

Another twist in the tail Andrew. You get me every time. I often start reading your poems trying to guess what the twist will be!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Mick

[GreenEyedPoet]

You and your twisted ends AM! You always catch me with them lol.
I should know better by now! haha.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you GEP lol

[B]

She must be simply enjoying the sun and coffee

I love your structure and how you engage your audience ......
I have to keep reading ...... every time

Really cool Andrew

[Gee]

Lol,got me there......sweeeet

[andrew mitchell]

thanks gee lolo

[wordman]

dam ,and i was falling in love

[andrew mitchell]

lol.....................

[Kelly Scheppers]

...you bait the hook and we always bite! ; )

[andrew mitchell]

lol Thank you Kelly:)