Time has abandoned me!

As I walk

Life's short foot path

I cannot capture

All there is to view.

Life's platter of food:

Love, dreams, quests, goals.

I cram. I hurry.

Not keeping up

With time. I'm behind.

Like my shadow

I already see

My dreams fade

Before me...

            ....no time.

Reviews

[GreenEyedPoet]

Sad how we are always in a rush and in the process end up missing so many things.
Great piece AM. :]

[andrew mitchell]

Just no time in a lifetime GEP lol

[GreenEyedPoet]

That's why we gotta make time for the important things. :D

[....................]

if only we had more time, Andrew we could catch up and still find time to write :)

[andrew mitchell]

We can't even borrow time lolThanks FT

[....................]

nope, no bank in the world can carry it :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yes a salutary message to make the most of the time we have Andrew!

[andrew mitchell]

Afraid so John Afraid so!! Thank you!

[sereenaoutloud]

so true we are always on the go and in a rush to keep up with everything that we miss it all!!
Really liked this one AM!!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you SOL I see my life disappearing already as my goals are years behind on what I want to achieve!:)

[sereenaoutloud]

its never too late...
but yes it seems to blur past faster and faster. I want my 20's back ..no my teens back...lol

[andrew mitchell]

initially before i clicked on more to read, I thought you wrote I want my 20 bucks back and I don't remember lending you 20! lol For me 20's sound nice !!:)

[sereenaoutloud]

LMAO yeh remember i loaned...hehehhe ... yeh early 20's does sound nice...21 perfect!!

[marcus]

We hurry so much that we miss our lives. I liked this!

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks marcus its scary!