superficial greetings!

Lost are the words

That carry no meaning

Shallow in depth

No promises.

Brush strokes, light

Patronizingly high

On emotion's ears

They fly forgotten.

Blown in the wind.

Lost without substance;

Light are the footprints

Of words not heavy.

Superficial in thought;

Plastic, cast adrift

Set free, afar, away

That contaminate the mind.

Insulting the impression

Given, no expression

Forgettable the words

Shallow tones spoken.

Reviews

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a perfect description in metaphor of those superficial greetings... they are meaningless, patronizing, superficial, insulting, and carry no weight... well-said, my friend

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks for your kind words FT:)

[sereenaoutloud]

Wow AM The metaphors are super u my friend. So many wonderful point where

Brush strokes patronizingly high

Light are the foot prints of words not heavy

Omg I could go on and on .. This is one of my favorites of your AM! Just brillaint!! :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so muchSOL