Sandpaper!

playing with words!

Slowly, her sand paper

Of love rubs and wears

My heart away, grinding.

All that remains, the end;

Dust and powder, feelings

Mine, blown away

With one puff

In the wind.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, a terrific allegory...finely ground love, just disappears in a cold breeze from one who once loved us.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks for the great review Jacob Much appreciated

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A very nice allegory Andrew as you describe how some people simply wear us down to the dried bones of our love and then love is gone.

[andrew mitchell]

How true John thank you my friend