In deepest Africa

In deepest Africa

A Poem by andrew mitchell

A Tracker knows
His markings well.
Like a doctor with a kitbag;
A craft of finding
On safari, early morning
In the red sands
He finds a footprint.
"Found one!"
"Pass me the grasshopper's foot! Its in my kitbag."
" Nope!  Its too small!"
"Pass me the antelopes foot!"
"Nope! Its not that one either!"
"Try the lion's foot."
"Nope! Not that one!"
"What about the cheetah!"
" Nope!" " That's not the one!"
"Lets try the elephants foot!
"Yes!".......... " Close!"
 "No!"
"Its not that one!"
Later.approaching evening
They realise, you only get
What you pay for!
"Pass me the Adidas shoe!"
"Nope! Its not that one!
" The Puma shoe!"
" At last!"
" I've found it!" 
"Oh!" "No!"
" Sorry, Everyone!"
" My mistake!"
" Its mine!"
The Tracker!

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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ahahaha! thanks for the laughs ..we certainly do get just what we pay for ... lesson learned right!?? :}
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thank you E
Hahaha.. loved this. Humorous yet conceptual. Loved the whole concept behind this poem that you portrayed.
I really salute your mind. You have a gifted imagination.

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thanks blackheart for your kind words
Always good to read your words my friend. Good to be a tracker. I'm blind now. No glasses, no see. I'm lucky. Two year Grandson is a expert tracker. Thank you Andrew for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

thank you john
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
wow...this has made me feel so at home here, the word safari rings a bell that brings me home although am already home. Thank you for the RR, i could never agree more with you that we only get what we ask for, we reap what we sow

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

thank you cassie
Your humour has an aetiology all of its own Andrew! Another funny tale with a twist at the end. Your mind must go to strange places to find these pieces but they are so very original and entertaining.

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Thank you John You are but a few to enjoy a laugh or be it, just a smile lol

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andrew mitchell

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