Her book!
A Poem by
andrew mitchell
In her book of life
Pages of love
Are torn, missing.
Broken was her heart
The chapter removed.
Her story still alive
Goes on long, searching,
Meandering, pausing
Taking a breath.
While happiness lies ahead
New, around the corner
Waiting, a chapter is born
The heroine doesn't know
Just yet.......
I'll finish her story tomorrow
The author.
© 2015 andrew mitchell
Reviews
Like the metaphor and the weaving of the ownership and responsibility of the author for a happy ending.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
thank you oh northern hemisphere buddy!
Your words are so sweet and romantic..absolutely charming!
:) Julie
Posted 10 Years Ago
Your words are so sweet and romantic..absolutely charming!
:) Julie
10 Years Ago
Thank you Julie, says she who is a romantic herself in her lovely writes :):)
Nice Andrew,oh,you could have burnt it and kept the ashes!!(he,he,he,he,he........)
Posted 10 Years Ago
Nice Andrew,oh,you could have burnt it and kept the ashes!!(he,he,he,he,he........)
10 Years Ago
lol...... what ashes;(
Great write, my friend... only the author knows and he's about to surprise the heroine... can't wait to read the next chapter :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
Great write, my friend... only the author knows and he's about to surprise the heroine... can't wait to read the next chapter :)
10 Years Ago
thanks ft lol
Quite romantic in its own way.
The author, the hero. :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
Quite romantic in its own way.
The author, the hero. :)
10 Years Ago
Yes the author determines her fate. Thanks Cherry
really well done metaphor here...
her story has taken a turn for the worse, but there is a happy ending in store...
and i will be that happy ending...
Posted 10 Years Ago
really well done metaphor here...
her story has taken a turn for the worse, but there is a happy ending in store...
and i will be that happy ending...
10 Years Ago
Jacob your reviews are kind and thoughtful. Thank you my friend.
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Added on July 11, 2015
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andrew mitchell adelaide, Australia
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