On the edge on the precipice of time

Standing on the edge of time

Looking back......

My points were viewed

Goals were made

On the tracks I laid

My own journey, my train

My thoughts did travel

Now....

Marked on a grave

"I'm still here!"

Reviews

[marcus]

and may we live forever........

[....................]

Let's hope that our words remain, my friend... well-said!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Master Po, Hoodoo Guru Of fine poetry!

[B]

And what a beautiful legacy to leave behind

A road well traveled !!

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks for your kind words N

[jacob erin-cilberto]

most of us, especially as poets, can relate to this...we do hope that after we are gone, we are still here.

j.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you J. So true!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha a stubborn conclusion to reach after such reflection. Defiance in the face of life itself told in a gamboling piece Andrew.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks go to you my Scottish friend!