Smart thought!

Through the traffic

Of thoughts, heavy

Pouring onto paper, jammed.

One thought meanders, slowly

On Ambleside footpath, no hurry

This thought took the bike.

What a Thought!

 

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

makes me belly chuckle sir! another hit in my book ..sometimes i am doing one thing (like reading) and all of a sudden i realize i am thinking of something completely distinct from what i am reading ... the really sad part is that i say to myself "Wow! I can do two things at once! " ;}}}
E.
ps strong use of the ol' metaphor ..i especially like your licence with "Ambleside footpath"

[andrew mitchell]

thanks e i have that same problem lol

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahahha! i thought you might ;}

[jeannemarie coulter]

excellent with a touch of humor...really enjoyed...

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much JC

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ah but was it a uni cycle? Another tightly packaged little ditty of thoughts that give the reader pictures to contemplate. There go those damned thoughts again!

[andrew mitchell]

haha thanks John