Ambushed!

Ambushed are the thoughts

When not prepared, hit head on

With words trapped, out flanked.

Reviews

[Arjun Singh]

NIce......nice imagination nd scenario....even though small, yt carries a deep meaning....

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Mr Singh

[Arjun Singh]

dunno if i m Mr. yet..... im jst 16 .... lol.... Master Singh mayb... :)

[Indra Neil]

brilliant brevity with unique imagery! enjoyed reading this!!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for your kind words Indra

[Indra Neil]

u r welcome!

[marcus]

were you in debate with Socrates?

[andrew mitchell]

lol no thanks marcus lol

[Valentine]

Out flanked when we open our mouths too wide and speak foolishness. Valentine

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Kathie

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ah, neat senryu, Andrew... trapped words ambush the thoughts before we can outmanoeuvre them to the page...

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks FT out numbered out manoeuvred lol

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, sometimes those words just get trapped inside...the ideas might come at the wrong time and we are not prepared to get them down on paper...so we lose them....

wonderfully true senryu...

j.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Jacob, yes we have had those outmanoeuvred moments of thought lol

[Sami Khalil]

So true and well spoken. Excellent description and delivery...:)......................

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Sami for your kind words

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).........................