What's your poison?

What's your poison?

A Poem by andrew mitchell

" Would you like another drink Sir?" asks the Waiter.
" Pour me another glass of Love. To the top, full! Thanks!"
" I love this drink!"
" Full bodied red. I feel so enriched, invigorated!"
"So intoxicating!"
" What's this place called again?"
"The Nectar of Love Arms" says the Waiter.
" You should try Desire, if I may recommend, Sir!" says the Waiter.
" Robust, alluring making you want more!"
"I think I'll try Lust this time"
"Nice choice!" 
"Thirst quenching but has you wanting more, never ever satisfying but so nice and warm!" says the Waiter.
" Oh yes! This is embracing, caressing I must say full of heart!"
" Excuse me waiter!"
" Why is that girl naked on the altar?"
" What is in that urn in his hand and why the goat's head mask?"
" Funny place this!"
" A strange cabaret show live if ever I've seen one!"

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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Oh. Wow. Can I get a glass of victory there? Where is this resturaunt? I wanna go. I think I might have a glass of luck too.
Did you drink a glass of awesomeness before writing this? Because I can see the affects in this poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

7 Years Ago

Lol thank you for stopping by Sarah.
Interesting. Very creative. Love the style and voice. Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Let me pour you a drink Reedwrite! Whats your poison? Jokes aside, thank you for reading and stoppin.. read more
ReedWrite

9 Years Ago

LOL...yw!
And I'll have a rum and coke, btw.
This piece is very fun and the style makes it very unique !

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

HeyJade Thank you for readingXO
ohh you got me ..i was enjoying the titillations ...then the stark reminder of what can happen when love turns to lust ... three Hail Maries and two Our Fathers for me! (seriously)
:)
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

hahaha thank you e for the smile. my friend.
Saucy and witty as usual my friend.....I enjoyed it immensely...great job

Posted 9 Years Ago


What an original way to write a poem. And it works really well.

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thank you Great Aunt Astri
This is so good. It's so smooth and it's neat. ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

thank you errenn lol
This is really fun. I like the way you did this, to portray those things in life to seem to control everyone. Job well done

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

thank you rachael
And the Devil serves our fantasies as Andrew expresses his lol!

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Hi John! Nice to hear from you again. Hope all is well! Thank you for your kind words lol
John Alexander McFadyen

10 Years Ago

Just clearing RRs not back for now. Glad to see you are still in there fighting.
Alright, I have just one question... what's the address of this place?

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

lol I don't know and if I did Would I tell

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Added on August 2, 2015
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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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