What's your poison?

What's your poison?

A Poem by andrew mitchell

" Would you like another drink Sir?" asks the Waiter.
" Pour me another glass of Love. To the top, full! Thanks!"
" I love this drink!"
" Full bodied red. I feel so enriched, invigorated!"
"So intoxicating!"
" What's this place called again?"
"The Nectar of Love Arms" says the Waiter.
" You should try Desire, if I may recommend, Sir!" says the Waiter.
" Robust, alluring making you want more!"
"I think I'll try Lust this time"
"Nice choice!" 
"Thirst quenching but has you wanting more, never ever satisfying but so nice and warm!" says the Waiter.
" Oh yes! This is embracing, caressing I must say full of heart!"
" Excuse me waiter!"
" Why is that girl naked on the altar?"
" What is in that urn in his hand and why the goat's head mask?"
" Funny place this!"
" A strange cabaret show live if ever I've seen one!"

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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A testament to the nuances of the many types of relationships we could find ourselves in...cleverly written, my friend!

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

FT thank you for your kind words my lobster eating matey!
Andrew strikes again, you clever fellow. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

thank you Robert lol
Haha where is this place? Count me in I want to try it! haha awesome write my friend... you are an awesome story teller... loved it :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

thanks Aaron for your kind words
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Oh very clever Andrew
The mixed emotions within
Makes you think

What is the point of having those places open to the public ?
I guess to simply confuse men ...... lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


Always written so well and with much cleverness:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Thank you Jamestown
so you've been to my local then Andrew lol, brilliant love the way it just twisted at the end, slipped down like a smooth malt, great work :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

hahaha Thank you Richard. Certainly not my local lol
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Yep,had to have the AM twist,as always a fun read

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

lol Thanks Gee a devil worshipping party indeed straight from Dennis Wheatley's Ride with the devil .. read more
That was fun to read. The ending was nice and weird. Haha

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Why thank you mattavelli. There had to be a twist!

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

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