A Slow combustion fire!

Aroused are her thoughts,

Hot embers glowing

Prodded and stoked;

Flames of desire

Rising, wanting.

The heat immeasurable

Wrapped in warmth

Her fire burning.

She's ready.

Marshmallows!

Forget it!

How 'bout we eat later?

On the rug ......

The fire watched as

The room got hotter!

Reviews

[MsJewel]

Filled with passion - a delicious little sensual treat Andrew - pass the marshmallows!

:) Julie

[Satan]

Nothing wrong with munching on the rug man, great write lmao.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks for dropping by you Devil you! LMAO

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Loved this, Andrew, especially the last line :D...nicely-penned, my friend

[andrew mitchell]

thank you kind Sir Thomas

[jacob erin-cilberto]

subtle sensuality in this piece as well...let's have s'mores, but not that kind...

i like the personification of the "fire watched as..."

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you jacob I like the line the fire watched lol