Setting the controls for the heart of the sun!

Pinched Pink Floyd's title!

She plays her song

On my heart strings; 

Pulled..... tightly.

Strumming her fingers

My chords gently

I whisper. 

"Less treble, more bass please!'

Reviews

[PANDORA]

I was cleaning today and listening to the radio and this song came on called, "I want a Sunday Kind of Love," by Etta James and I knew I was going to steal the title right away. I really try to find something to critique because I love a good critique but...and I want to insert the "F" word here but I don't know if you would find it appropriate...I can't find one word out of place and the last line is sublime. This is going in my library.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Pandora for a great review and of course you can use the F word lol.

[PANDORA]

:-).................

[alifeacoustic]

I love the title. One of floyds best tracks from their early years and listened to more times than is good for me, but it still finds it's way back onto the turntable every now and again.
We are never happy, are we? When they play, we so want to teach them the tune. Heaven forbid it is one taught from someone else. :)

[andrew mitchell]

I love Pink Floyd's earlier work! Thank you Lorry for your time and reviews

[Bear]

When I read the title in your read request I said to myself "I love that song" I am a big Pink Floyd fan. I would also like to know what radio station Pandora was listening to that plays Etta James, I saw her at the Newport Jazz Festival 25 years ago and she could still blast out her song At Last. See how your poem inspires all these great memories with its musical merriment :~)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Bear from so few words a treasure chest of memories are opened.

[softlyfall]

all about this poem...no treble
you shake it shake it shake it like you're s'posed to do, Andrew.
All the right junk in all the right places.

My boom boom loves this

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you boom boom I mean softlyfall ;)

[Cool Girl]

Beautifully written about love. I love how you write with variety, Mr. Mitchell. It gives you a uniqueness. Thank you for sharing your stunning poetry with me. I am glad to have met you :) -CG

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you CG and likewise;)

[Cool Girl]

You're very welcome!

[....................]

it's all about that bass, right? :) ... well-done, my friend!

[andrew mitchell]

thanks so much FT

[Gee]

Morning,nicely done Andrew,now back to the,OUR,ashes..........

[andrew mitchell]

Ashes what ashes???? hahaha!!

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

You always surprise me with the ending Andrew! Nicely inked.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Jane for your kind words