Surreal

playing with thoughts!

Surreal the dream

That kills the dream

Of a dream that felt

So real.

Reviews

[Lyingwithlions]

Very clever! I like it alot, especally how it sounds read aloud. Almost like a nursrey rhyme.

Any plans to add to this piece? It left me wishing for more. :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you livingwithlions It was a brief clever moment I had lol

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the paradox presented here...the irony of the irony.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Jacob for your kind words.