If you had not.

Had you not touched me,

Free floating my thoughts:

An astronaut I would be.

For pressed are my thoughts

Grounded, by your gravitational

Pull, you have over me;

Fond memories!

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

great metaphor usage...some want to grow up and be astronauts, but when it comes to love, it is best to be grounded.

[andrew mitchell]

Too right J and even that can be shaky! lol Thanks J

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we all have reasons why we aren't floating around in space, trying to find life on mars or taking photos of the cosmos... sometimes a gravitational pull is just what we need...ah, the power in a single touch can send us rocketing into space or keep us grounded...well-done, Andrew

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you my friend for your kind words. Indeed what a touch can do!