Closing the door!

When you took your love

In suitcase packed

That should of stayed.

You left me pain

That remained instead.

The message clear

No smile given

In tears was written

Goodbye!

Reviews

[wordman]

sad write andrew,you never know hidden emotions

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you wordman

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Andrew you can be funny as hell one minute and have me fighting back tears the next....a sign of a prolific writer!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Jane for the big compliment!:)

[B]

I always had a belief
Whoever could stand departure
Never deserved the stay

[andrew mitchell]

lol nice comment :)

[GreenShoes]

Oh, my. Sounds like a difficult time indeed. In one little poem, you conveyed a major chapter in your life. I hope things are better for you.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Karen Its just fictional writing lol

[GreenShoes]

Oh, I'm happy to hear that! :)

[....................]

it's tough to watch love leave in a suitcase... it really is good-bye at that point... a sad but spot on write, my friend

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you FT indeed it is :0

[....................]

you are welcome :)