A Round Tuit!

She didn't believe me

When I said

I'll get round to it!

But I did.......

It was just a very big circle!

Reviews

[zephyr]

LOL … did not know what to expect with the title. A pleasant surprise.

[andrew mitchell]

lol Thank you so much Shinsei

[Richard🖌]

I really enjoy your crafty, creative humor, Andrew, and your wordplay is wonderfully original in a way that belays cliché, and that is no small accomplishment, considering most everything that can be expressed has been.
On a techy level:
I would love to see you open-up your compositions a bit, with some thoughtful spaces for pauses to think and for breathing, and more fun for the mind's-eye. Everything adds to the reader's experience and enjoyment, and delivers the punches your earnest work deserves … so few know about or care enough to present their work in its most appealing way, which definitely effects how it reads, how it's felt, and is understood — end of sermon … LOL!

Thanks a zillion for sharing You and and your excellent skills with us, My Friend! ⁓ Richard

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Richard for a wonderful review and I appreciate your comments. I shall work on presentation as your demo on Shyness was excellent. Its funny I've visited your site before and I thought how professional your skills are! Where mine is somewhat primitive! lol having no formal training and I never like rules anyway but presentation to entice the reader is an art to work on:) Thanks Richard

[Richard🖌]

Thank you sincerely for your inspiring and appreciated sentiments on my skills, Andrew.
Poetry is an art form to work on, too, Andrew. : )
Art requires discipline, dedication, and learning of whatever field your interests might involve you, and there is more to poetry than we can learn in one lifetime, but you have a good foundation to build on, I think … rules never hurt anyone, if they are of the kind that make one knowledgeable and more capable, eh?

[Relic]

haha. ~ Everything comes full circle as they say. Good one andrew. ~

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Relic It does indeed!

[Einstein Noodle]

:) time and distance can be a varied and subjective experience :))) blessed is that man who has a woman that is rife with patience and understanding ... i was putting in a bathroom in the basement for 8 yrs. before she said..can we please get that done! ;) and i did!
E.

[andrew mitchell]

haha a funny true story we all relate too! Thank you E

[Einstein Noodle]

she is one in a million!