The Tear!

The Tear.

As their love unfolded

An indelible crease

Was made.

They tried to straighten,

To remove the blemish.

In doing so,

They ripped their page.

The tear produced;

In the end....

Tore them apart.

Reviews

[Rinzin Samdup]

Aww....Hurts!! :( short yet beautifully put.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Rinzin

[Rinzin Samdup]

you welcome mate.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nicely metaphoric....but oh so sad, and nice double meaning in the title.

[andrew mitchell]

lol You don't miss a trick J I did wonder if it would be noticed even though the emphasis was on tear as in tearing haha

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sometimes those creases are beyond repair and in our attempts to make things right we destroy the pages of our love... this is such a sad, yet creative, write...well-done, Andrew

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you dear friend FT

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you are welcome, sir