An opening!

An Opening!

Had you not

Opened my door.

Death by routine

Was inevitable.

You let in

The freshness.

That drove away

My staleness.

Through your eyes

I saw an opening.

Now please 

Close the door.

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

"You let in the freshness that drove away my staleness..."

How ingenious a thought!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Freshness!

[Rinzin Samdup]

sweet, i can use your lines to woe a lady! is it OK if i use it?
LOL

[andrew mitchell]

Rinzin of course you can I just hope they work lol. Thanks for your kind words

[Rinzin Samdup]

anytime. Thank you for the permit :) And yes hope it works LOL

[wordman]

ahh,a breeze of fresh love,blowing on me.close the door,stay a while

[andrew mitchell]

haha Thank you wordman I shall return the love as they say on this site and visit you soon lol

[wordman]

no hurry my friend,i post comments because i want to my friend

[....................]

before she gets away... some people do this to us: they bring freshness into our stale lives...well-said, my friend

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much for your kind words Thomas

[....................]

my pleasure, Andrew