Your humble servant!

I fly to you

With intent

On mind.

I want to kiss

Your neck

Slowly.

Your leg,

Your thigh, 

Divine.

How I want

To suck your juices

That river of life.

Your humble servant.

The mosquito.

Reviews

[marcus]

Mosquito! Now that was a let down, there I was thinking...well never mind.

[andrew mitchell]

lol Sorry marcus

[Einstein Noodle]

you are in a mood sir! :) damn 'squites .. when i was a young boy me and friends would capture them by spreading the skin tight so they could not escape but continued to gorge ... blotted on our own blood .. the idea was they would pop and we could have vengeance .. but vengeance is mine sayeth the Lord .. and most always they escaped in drunken stupor ... yeh ..boys are pretty stupid some times ;)
E.

[andrew mitchell]

I like to entertain Sir! and mozzies like me but I can't say I do like them! lol I often wonder why the lord would create a mozzie cos they spread disease

[Einstein Noodle]

true dat blood! ;)

[Leif]

Thank god. Up until the end, I thought this was going to be another homage to the twilight movies.

[andrew mitchell]

Lol Thank you Leif

[Rinzin Samdup]

oh me....you fooled me mate...LOL....a twist!!!

[andrew mitchell]

I like a twist just for fun Rinzin. Thanks for dropping by

[jacob erin-cilberto]

but as we approach her to do all these things, we are often swatted away...with little more regard than that of the lowly mosquito...

nice analogy...
j.

[Relic]

Ahh, nice twist at the end. As a drummer, I've often played at night in backyard parties. Boy, there's nothing worse than knowing he's right on your neck or back and there's not much you can do. haha. That's when the bug spray comes around. You draw the reader in with this one, than, ahh, got ya, just like swatting a fly. :) Nice one andrew.

[andrew mitchell]

Always wanted to be a drummer. Good on you!. I dislike mozzies but they love me! Thanks Relic

[....................]

One always wonders how your poem will turn out, Andrew, and that is what is entertaining...the way you build your lines makes it easy for readers to become hooked...love the twist at the end but we have our shaper of the little buggers here and i take great pleasure in being the mosquito assassin :)

[andrew mitchell]

I hate mozzies but they like me Thanks Ft

[Kelly Scheppers]

Those little buggers drove me crazy when I lived on the east coast. I think I prefer them to being poetically immortalized in cyberspace, than nibbling on my neck!

Thank you for the smile, Andrew! ...always!

[andrew mitchell]

zzzzzzzzzzzzz Stop That's when you know its got you lol I hate mozzies. Thanks Kelly:)