The love letter!

 The love letter.

Running was the ink, displayed

Of a love so cherished.

Down the page, spilt

Now on the floor.

The love running was endless

A river flowing

Love's banks broken,

Undying love.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is sad and a bit scary...hoping that spilt ink, now on the floor is the blue ink from the pen...not red from a cut...but maybe red from a bleeding heart.

once the banks break like a dam...can't stop it.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks J It was suppose to convey copious amounts of love outpouring( the ink) from the ink well for the loved one..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it does do that, Andrew....but also leaves room for other interpretations...and that is what makes it such a good poem. that we readers can see it in different light....

[andrew mitchell]

I know! Its funny how interpretations depend on your mindset at the time as I saw your angle which I didn't before:) Thanks J

[marcus]

undying love, written out in the black ink of our hearts.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you matey I shall return the views