Timing!

Timing!

Looking back

I saw her.

A sleek, shiny, sports car.

How she revved red!

How I revved

Broom! Broom!

I wanted to chase her

Drive her.

But me, 

An old car stalling.

She drove off!

Timing!

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

slick metaphor here...she is in fifth gear, you are stuck in second----Shut Down!

"tack it up tack it up, buddy gonna shut you down"

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Blue Rodeo wrote a song called 'Bad Timing', though it's not about a car :)...if your car goes Broom Broom you have more than timing issues :D

[andrew mitchell]

That's just my humour FT should I delete this line cos its not about cars lol

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lol no sir...it's a keeper...and a good one at that!!

[andrew mitchell]

Its a bit risque maybe childish lol that line. I shalll check those lyrics! Thanks