From one scene to another!

From one scene to another!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

From one scene to another!
As my train of life
Pulled out of the station.
I was left behind.
I shouted. "Stop! Wait!"
I ran waving
Then I realised.
I was in the after-life
The other-side.
Until I woke up
"What a terrible dream!"
Back in the real world.
" Hey you! Leave that alone!"
" Stop probing me!"
"When I get off this table I'm going
To smack you one so hard.
Heaven help you!" 
"Okay! Okay! Just joking!"
" Put away that ray gun."
"And get your dirty green hands off me!"
" Beam me down! Right now!"
Don't you just hate it,
When you've been abducted by
Little green aliens!

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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Reality VS Dream..nicely written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I couldn't help laughing at the first scene as I imagined you running, waving and finally waking up all sweaty, scared and with a heavily pounding heartbeat.

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Wait till I tell FT you were laughing at my horror! lol
yep! I remember it well Andrew, I was on the table next to yours! Great write as always my friend :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

So I wasnt dreaming lol Thank you Richard
there are some scenes (and pains in the a*s) in life i would rather do without...Alien life has always fascinated me but I don't think I want to experience it :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Yes you hear of these abductions and each recall a dream like atmosphere! . Not for me thanks, I'm n.. read more
haha interesting take... whats real and whats not? Nice work... if I get abducted I better not see a probe! haha

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

lol Thanks Aaron for your kind words!
this experience doesn't sound so appetizing...when i was much younger i always wished for the experience to happen...i think now i have been better off staying right here on earth....away from all that probing...



Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

haha Thank you J for your review

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