Oops!

Oops!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Oops!
Tip toeing on her thoughts, tender
I slipped, I laughed.
Her anger, well placed,
I retreated for cover.
Throwing chocolates at her,
Waiting for.....
                    the change in weather!

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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Haha. At first I wasn't sure if i should be angry at the implication that chocolate will make women happy and everything better, but.. too funny to be mad. Also, it's right too! Lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Thank you Rocksie
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lol
if you read this poem to her she will stop being angry with you
i cant stop laughing

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

hahaha Thank you Nisreenaa
We mostly only pretend to get angry; best way to guarantee chocolates and flowers. :)))

Beccy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Now you tell me! lol Thanks Beccy
hope you threw the right kind of chocolates, the ones she really likes.

:)))

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

hahaha thank you J

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Added on September 19, 2015
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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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