Falling!

Falling!

Riding on the golden trail, autumn

I find myself propelled to doom.

Bronze, brown, yellow.

The trip is one of gloom. 

Reviews

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clever title and write, Andrew...

[andrew mitchell]

I pinched this from your never used library of brevity poems 2009!!! Thank you FT :)

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hahahaha...glad you found them :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i can see this feeling happening....it is like with people...we notice their color, their flair most often just before we lose them to the winter of death.

[andrew mitchell]

Yes I agree Jacob and thank you for your words!

[terry smith]

why? Because the coming winter throws snowballs at your overalls?? :)

[andrew mitchell]

haha If only we got snow!! Thanks Terry for dropping by.

[terry smith]

should I send you some air mail? :)

[andrew mitchell]

make my day! bring it!