A spur of the moment

Tender her breast soft

I lay my head ,rest

her heart pumping , fast

arousal I hear.

Awakened is she

moved am I

she takes the lead

locked together

as one once more.

Reviews

[SleeplessVolcano]

What a sensual write!
The title creates a lovely contrast with a love which seems to continue....as if it is not an impulsive love at all......:)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Sleepless Volcano:):) For your kind words!

[Cassie]

Andrew, you are being very very naughty here I must say...lol.
I did enjoy it you know. Hope you have been well, missed reading you

[andrew mitchell]

I tried to be so subtle lol I'm not too bad just been so busy with work and family! I'm so far behind!

[....................]

often the best moments are those that hit us out of no where...sensually written observation, my friend

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Thomas

[andrew mitchell]

And I agree totally! lol

[....................]

you are welcome, my friend

[Helen Crutchett]

Andrew! Something tells me this should be for "Mature readers only." Maybe change it LOL??

Yes, it was 'white-hot'.....:)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Blue Rose. I thought it was too subtle for a mature rating lol but I can

[Helen Crutchett]

LOL you are correct, don't change it!

Helena

[andrew mitchell]

lol thanks Helena What a laugh!

[Helen Crutchett]

I really don't know why I wrote that!!!! :)

[andrew mitchell]

Your imagination got the better of you Helena! Thank you for your kind reviews only we know what's going on!:)

[Helen Crutchett]

Oh, is that what it was? My imagination does run away with me at times hahahaha.
That's what good poetry does to one !!

[Terry O'Leary]

Romantically hot!!
Well done!!!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Terry

[Valentine]

WHEW>>>>> the romantic side of you is popping through. Valentine

[andrew mitchell]

haha Thank you Kathie