In a puddle!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

In a puddle!

Before love began

I fell over.

I tripped....

over my emotions

I poured.

I left....

my heart in a puddle

trampled underfoot.

© 2015 andrew mitchell

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RomaJ

Good grief. Had love come with a caution sign.. the ones they place, when the floors are wet...it would have saved a lot of "fallen hearts" Lol love this. "Love cautiously" ...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago

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10 Years Ago

Thank you Roma, welcome back, hope you are okay. Yes in my teens I lost a few dates with girls from .. read more

10 Years Ago

It's good to be back and to read you again. I am fine, thank you. Hope you are as well.
Oh go.. read more

10 Years Ago

What's a hellion? If its bad I doubt it! lol I like your profile pic :0

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Added on October 11, 2015
Last Updated on October 11, 2015

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andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia

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Strindberg said. " When I come home and sit at my writing table, then I live.... I live, and I live in manifold fashion of all human beings. I depict; I am glad with the glad, wicked with the wicked,.. more..