Completely surrounded I ... disappeared.

Completely surrounded I.... disappeared.

Of all the times

I switched on

my light

I was left

in the cold, still.

Their darkness

was bigger...

Lost...

I faded.

Reviews

[softlyfall]

Yes, just as alone is so much more alone in a crowd, so do shadows and loneliness have layers and levels. The trick i to let your inner light, independent of all, even you, shine so bright that any shadow will pale and you cannot fade.
I always have such delicious anticipation when I approach one of your poems. I never know what to expect, and this I love.

[andrew mitchell]

You got it amy !!! there are levels and layers. Thank you for you review and lovely words:)

[θεά]

Quite different from your usual self, this is.
Umbra and shadows are more oppressive than we would like to admit.
Some literal, and others not so literal.
Thanks for the share, Andrew.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Malika don't like you getting too complacent with my writes, have to throw in a twister! lol No, seriously thank you for your time reading. much appreciated:)

[zunie frost]

You are so awsome ! You alway describe 8ery beautifully in just few words !
Nicely written

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you my dear poet friend Zunie:):):) Thank you again!!

[zunie frost]

Zou are very wellcome

[AaronFreitas]

I like the thoughts my friend... a unique perspective... I enjoyed your work :)

[andrew mitchell]

G'day Aaron Its been a while. Thank you my friend. :)