on her shores

On her shores.

On the shores

of her mind,

life's a beach 

when you know

her sands.

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome thoughts... simple yet perfectly written :)

[ANTO]

Top write Andrew. Sounds like an idyllic strand to spend time. Class !!

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks mate for a top compliment:):)

[LapseOfMind]

Wow, this is very good! Great job!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you dear poet I shall return the love

[Cassie]

awww..this is a sweet little poem Andy

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you dear Cassie:)

[RomaJ]

This is so lovely. All I can think about is silk and warmth as I read this lovely bit. Mmm. I like it.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you silky!:0

[Sami Khalil]

I love this. It is gooood.....).......

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)........................

[Einstein Noodle]

what a treat i think this little poem is!! i love it ... reading it over and over again it is simply a blessing ..i think about my beloved in its regard ... and her mind, shores and sands are all that!! really like this one! into the library it goes sir!
E.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much EN

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and wonderful beach to dig your toes into...feel those sands of love between them.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Jacob for your kind words