He stopped the search

Flying no more

his tired heart

bleeds.

He's given up

searching....

true love.

He closes the door.

Reviews

[Dani The Unreviewed]

There's always something, that will reopen that door my friend.
well done.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Danny

[Dani The Unreviewed]

no problem :-)

[Adam Adams]

So here the metaphor's being broken; utter shattered into shivering pieces of his castled-love - the love that once pleased him ov'r the night, now, became .. what, nothing but the way to kindle her poor heartaches - the hurt, which further & father led him not to love, anymore ... cos, it's - the love - nothing more than a vision that's meant to be "botched". Short, simple & sorta deep write!

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks for a top review Adams. Much appreciated

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i have not only closed it, i have at times, slammed it...

[andrew mitchell]

lol I know I know that feeling! Thanks J