Wet thoughts

The elixir,

          

                love

                        pours

                                 down

                                          wet

                                                thoughts

                                                             showering

            

                                                                            her

                                                                                  soul.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

when the love is more than just physical, the thoughts that accompany making love are like a blissful sun shower....so rejuvenating .....

j.

[andrew mitchell]

That's for sure J. Thank you for your words.

[Adam Adams]

Kinda interesting thing you poured down in words. Liked the factor of "Elixir Love". Sounds way astounding. Aside that, the title's enough to soothe the whole poetry you seemed to be bled in. Looking forward to reading your work!

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Adam, I wanted this to sound like a cocktail beverage going down. Just be warned I'm no pro at poetry but I have fun!:)