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On water's edge

her love flowed,

a waterfall.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, Adams' reviews are so cool, aren't they...expressive.


as is this short poem that spills so much sentiment out of its three lines...i can feel her love from here.

i have always enjoyed being on that edge...and then plunging into the fall, recklessly, not caring about drowning, or maybe hoping to...delightfully risking.

[andrew mitchell]

Sometimes its a great swim while it lasts, to dive into her love recklessly. Thank you J and yes adam reviews are cool as are yours.:)

[Adam Adams]

"Her love flowed a waterfall?" Sounds very deep ...
Seemed:

"... she's one ocean - the ocean of secrets herself - that has its own way / directions to stream along. And, when she floats, flows and gets blown by winds ... along the edges, what comes forward's its coldness - her love - the "Waterfall" - that showers the whole "sailor" will pleasure ... " Nice imagery!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much Adams so few words inspired a great review. Thank you.