Sadness swells

             To know sorrow

                      swim,

              my sadness swells.

             

             The levee broken

                      you'll

                drown in tears

                     dammed

                         in

                    my estuary.

                          

Reviews

[B]

And thats why when you see sadness
You run for your dear life
i do
i know its mean
but it swells its owner and everyone around him or her

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you nis for your nice reviews:) as always

[B]

my pleasure always

[andrew mitchell]

:)...............

[Bear]

The madness of emotions gone wild and the lyrics of an old song come to mind, "cry me a river" yours a more fitting lyric but it is lacking enough words to fill a sheet of music, expand damn it you need more words before a song it could make :~)

[andrew mitchell]

thank you Bear I do like that song Cry me a river by Julie London.