Sad

fiction based on life experiences!

Hanging on the

threads of love,

she cuts his ties,

released, abandoned.

Looking back....

Hammered the wedge

between two hearts,

broken the bond,

lost in translation

split, divorced.

Sawdust remains,

     memories

      scarred,

   not forgotten,

     wind blown.

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Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

even after the wind blows the particles, they settle close enough together to keep our memories...even if we don't want them.

[andrew mitchell]

So true J. Thanks for dropping in, much appreciated.

[B]

Divorce is no easy thing to experience
but u live

[andrew mitchell]

There's no time limit on how long a relationship will really last. Each takes its course! Thank you Nisreen

[B]

yeah but a divorce ends everything
and living out of that experience
its like dying and coming back to life

only if some people could appreciate that ......

[andrew mitchell]

its like the seasons from divorce brings hope ,new growth on finding true love that you didn't know existed before. as do some that cling to the old and should really let go

[B]

i cling to nothing

[andrew mitchell]

life is all about journeys and discoveries for some and thats life, you go with the flow wherever it takes you.

[B]

i have been going with the flow for so long now
i am so tired
when does the flow stop and i end up on a shore

[Bear]

Sad is right, a grand melodrama played out in realities terms, some would say the thread is a part of fates tapestry and the outcome destiny, but either way the memory still holds a bitter taste. Bravo! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[andrew mitchell]

thanks for a great review Bear

[Einstein Noodle]

i like the free verse style ..sad indeed ...most will not avoid the scarring :{
E.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you E