She left without paying...

Just a dark fictional write! lol

Heavy your footprint

applied, my heart,

juiced in the making;

you drank as you

squashed the

very essence, me.

On pavement

you walked,

left I was... bleeding

discarded.

Reviews

[Valentine]

Every word tells all of the feeling. Valentine

[andrew mitchell]

thank you Kathie:)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Absolutely no critique necessary here for a poem that shines with each successive line.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much dear poet

[Einstein Noodle]

cruel heart ..that uses with disregard ..some people do meet them ..must say i am thankful i have not ... tho my life is certainly not without pain and loss :)
E.

[andrew mitchell]

I have had hearts so cruel. Thank you E as always!:)

[Einstein Noodle]

man! i would tip a pint with you sir ..at your favorite pub ..just to be simpatico and maybe ease the pain :)

[andrew mitchell]

lol it was decades ago lol, only hurts in monetary terms now, slow is the recovery ha!

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ... a pint in memory then :))