Her castle

On raising 

her drawbridge

I thought 

I was in.

Only to find

she lowered

her portcullis.

I had no entry,

invites only,

her castle.

Reviews

[jesserose99]

oh, your poetry is lovely...refreshing. This was so funny...poor lass didn't know she had left you off the invite list I am sure Andrew.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you so much for your kind words Jesserose, just my wicked sense of humour in action lol

[Bear]

Don't you hate when you get invited to the party just to find out there is nothing to eat, no one to dance with and you go home alone early, at least you got to see her petticoats while the drawbridge was up :~)

[andrew mitchell]

haha thanks bear

[jacob erin-cilberto]

there are so many guards put up when trust is a wavering issue, like ripples in the moat.

j.

[andrew mitchell]

too many to knock down is a sign FLEE! lol Thanks J